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12 March 2013

How to construct an essay and other academic writing



Having been fortunate enough to obtain a First Class Honours degree and secure the award of the Michael MccGwire Prize during my Masters degree; I periodically come across someone who asks me to read an essay or other academic piece.  Therefore I thought that it would be prudent to upload some notes to help others.  In all instances, the academic regulations and rules of an institution take precedence over anything written here.

The first rule that a student needs to research and thereafter understand is that of constructing a sentence.  Writing a sequence of words starting with a capital letter and ending with a full stop; does not necessarily mean that a sentence has been created.

So STEP 1 is yours to learn unaided by me.  Enter the phrase “how to construct a sentence” into an online internet search engine and thereafter read articles on the subject so that you then understand what is expected of you when writing an academic piece.  Note that the use of quotation marks before and after a sequence of words in a search engine, will limit the engine to search for that particular phrase.

STEP 2 is about the specifics of the required spacing that has to be inserted along a line, between lines, and from the edge of the paper to the margin.  The margin has to be of a sufficient size to enable the paper to be bound and for the binding arrangement not to interfere with the visibility of the text on the left hand side of the page.  With this requirement in mind, it follows that inserting a gap of 25mm is a minimum requirement, but please note that your institution might insist on a gap of 30mm or more.  Line spacing should be at least 1.5 in order to assist the marker in examining and commenting on your work.  Whenever you end a sentence, press the ‘space bar’ twice before starting the next sentence.

The next comment is of a general nature and is here to assist the student to understand exactly what it is that they are trying to convey to their academic tutor.  STEP 3 is about telling a story and understanding the importance of adequate planning prior to writing anything down on paper or vigorously typing onto the screen.  Your academic piece is a story, a bit like a ‘news story’ in that this story is being relayed to someone who knows nothing about the subject.  You must forget that your tutor has probably forgotten more than you currently know, and instead think of them as a blank canvas.  Constructing the story in a manner that assists their understanding is the primary objective of the academic piece.   

This leads us nicely onto STEP 4 and an analysis of how we will construct our story.  We relay the story through sentences and paragraphs and sections that contain key ideas and themes.  In general terms one sentence should naturally lead onto the next sentence so that the story builds, just like an orchestra moving towards its major movement.  Little bits sound, others sound, instruments link, and then the crescendo that brings the individual parts together.  So if sentences link to form paragraphs and paragraphs stand alone or link to form sections, then we need to understand how many of which go where.  In extremely broad terms a paragraph consists of twelve to fourteen sentences.  The paragraph takes you neatly through that aspect of the story and deposits you neatly into the next paragraph.  The next paragraph takes up where the previous paragraph left off and leads you nicely through the next part of the story.

‘The News’ is the requirement of STEP 5; as it is the process whereby the author tells the reader what they are going to read via an introduction.  Then uses the main body of the essay to tell the reader what the news story is all about.  Thereafter finishing with a conclusion and or summary that are used to tell the reader what they have just read.  The author does not repeat phrases in all three sections, but instead uses commentary and themes to tease in the ideas when forming the introduction and alternative phrases to reinforce the message when writing the conclusion.  The key point being that the essay begins to take on a structure that makes sense and is easily readable.

Making sense is also the relevance of STEP 6 as it is here that we use footnotes or endnotes (as preferred by your institution of the specific tutor dealing with your paper) to further explain and explore items that are mentioned in your story, but where further explanation across the page would clutter the detail and muddle the link between sentences and paragraphs.  For example we may use an acronym and these combination of letters need to be explained to the reader.  If the same acronym is widely used throughout the essay, then we can mention its full title when it is first used and thereafter use the acronym.  But with multiple acronyms we would want to limit the clutter within the essay and put the explanations into the notes.  The footnotes are also used to further elaborate on people, their current of previous role, and the duration of such roles.  These are simple examples of endnote or footnote usage, but remember that there are no restrictions as to what the notes can be used for.  Try thinking of the notes as something that enables you to de-clutter and also support your essay.  

STEP 7 is about ‘the wood for the trees’ syndrome.  All too often, what we write for others to read; is not exactly the message that we were trying to convey.  Grammatical errors and the difficulties in using a second language are obvious problems that impact on this aspect of an essay.  But quite often the confusion is caused by our excitement and rush to write down what we believe are key observations, without first thinking them through.  Thereafter we read the same piece as meaning what we intended, instead of recognising what is actually written on the page.  This is where impartial proof reading by a friend can pay dividends prior to submitting your work.  Does my essay answer the question? 

The next step is about pushing the boundaries beyond that which was stipulated by the person setting the question.  STEP 8 is about originality of thought and the inclusion of ideas for further research.  Irrespective of how good a student is; no one can answer a particular question in full within a given number of words.  There will always be an alternative view that has to be left unexamined, or some area however vague, that is worthy of exploration if you had the time and word count limit to do so.  Therefore make sure that you briefly inform your tutor in the conclusion to the essay of your ideas for further research.

Striving to achieve academic excellence is the requirement of STEP 9 as it’s the bit that gives the credibility to the work.  This is where we prove understanding, and prove that learning has occurred.  I recently read an undergraduate essay whereby the student made no reference whatsoever to any academic text or author.  I can only imagine that which has been missed during the study period, or that which may even be a direct lift from another text.  Including correct citations and references from other sources of material is an important aspect in academia.  It helps to show that you have read and understood material, and have similar or differing views to that author.  You may even find an error, whereby something written by someone else can be proven to be incorrect.  Or the source material may be misleading, whereby that author deliberately used specific information to tailor their argument while omitting other information from their sources that showed their argument to be flawed.  Reading, quoting, and citing other material is not cheating.  This academic excellence demonstrates learning, understanding, relevance of arguments, application of material within context, supporting arguments to your core themes, opposing arguments that contain flaws and the reasons why these flaws exist in your opinion, the limitations of other material, the lack of credible material within a specific field, the opportunities that exist for further research.   

STEP 10 is about learning and applying the academic citation method of your institution or the preferred method of your tutor so that you accurately and meticulously cite all references stated in your work.  No academic essay or paper should be deposited for marking without the student referencing all sources of information that were considered during the writing of the work, and no work should ever be written without searching and reading such sources. 

Remember to keep simple notes when you read academic material so that you can find a particular comment or observation with ease.  It’s good practice to start a page with the title, author and full citation of the work in the form required by your institution or tutor.  Then make notes whenever you notice something relevant and worthwhile to your studies.  To avoid clutter it is good practice to leave a line gap between each note, and to end each note with the page number relevant to the observation.  When you are reading such material it is inevitable that you will have some original thought.  When such brilliance does occur, don’t forget to mark the note in a way that stipulates that this is your idea.  This will assist you when you return to your notes in a few days or weeks after reading the material.

I hope that you have found this brief summary useful.  But please remember, the requirements of your academic institution or the specific preferences of your tutor far outweigh the observations written here.

6 March 2013

Message to Glendon S. Farquhar from Mobile Alabama

All the best my friend AND chin up. They may have interrupted your academic journey BUT it's only an interruption. Stay strong and maybe UK immigration will not mess up next time. It's appalling what has happened to you seeing that you travelled here to study, secured and started a Masters course at a World renowned institution, and were paying into our local economy. Someone somewhere should have exercised a degree of common sense. Alas, they did not. But it's only an interruption and it only becomes something else if you let it.

Pob lwc i ti Glendon; a dwi'n gobiethio i weld ti amser nesaf yn y 'Fall'

4 March 2013

Free Glendon S. Farquhar

It's bureaucracy gone mad! He was studying his Masters in the U.K.

All legitimate and was attending all of his lectures studying Medieval Welsh having paid extortionate fees to study and live at a World Class Institution together with the high cost of traveling to and from Mobile Alabama. Like a good son he travelled across The Pond to visit his folks at Christmas AND wait for it; on his return back to the U.K. after another transcontinental flight along with domestic travel, someone decides not to let him back in because the Visa is wrong.

Well if it's that wrong, then what on earth were you doing letting Glendon into the U.K. to start his course months earlier, to pay his fees, to pay for student accommodation, and to embark on his academic journey?

Anyone from anywhere can come to the U.K. and not only will we gladly let them in; but we will also dole out our social security, our health system, our supporting systems.

But when a hard working, financially self supporting, lovely chap from Mobile Alabama pays to study at a World Class Institution, and pays into the local economy instead of being a drain on resources, we send him packing.

Oh my Goodness; we have lost the plot!

1 March 2013

Patron Saint of Wales

Happy St Davids Day everyone :-)

26 February 2013

What the . . .

This is my latest FB POST;

". . .Can someone please tell me what happened for my Blog page reviews to jump from 3,000 over 5 years to 8,400 in 1 month. Like mad or what!"

It's never too late

It is fantastic news as reported by the BBC that ". . . Veterans who served on Arctic convoys and in Bomber Command during World War II are to be recognised for their bravery and service with a new medal and award."

It is about time, and although a long time coming, this sensible decision is not too late. Thousands upon thousands of brave people, lived and operated in fear and extreme risk. Their colleagues saw too many die, and their loved ones often had no body to bury. Gone to the sea, or a scrap of land in a foreign country.

Well done to those that made the right decision. Now please distribute the medals and clasps as soon as possible to those who are still alive and to the widows of those who are not.

28 January 2013

Hair loss

You know that yucky feeling when you have a hair in your mouth? Well, I won't be getting that sensation for some time into the future now. Nope, not after wifey left her hair remover tube next to my toothbrush in the hotel bathroom and packed everything else up and deposited her suitcase at reception. Arriving back at the room after a late and enjoyable breakfast; I duly brushed my teeth. Yuck, double yuck, and disgusting.

Said toothpaste style tube now has its body marked with the word "hair" in several places and is soundly wrapped in cello tape to ensure that the embossed new title can't be rubbed off. You may want to do the same if anyone in your family buys toothpaste style and sized tubes of hair remover. Or buy them a blinking big razor. But hey ho, there's no hairs in my mouth anymore. Nope, just the unnatural taste of hair remover.

27 January 2013

Holocaust Day

You can't wish everyone "A Happy Holocaust Day", so I shall instead "Wish you all a very long memory". Please don't forget those who died, how they died, and why they died.

It shouldn't have happened again, but they tried to replicate it in the Balkans and Africa; albeit in lower numbers.

The idea of Ethnic cleansing is disgusting, but time and time again people see human differences in religion, group ancestry, or body features as reasons for removing specific groups from this world.

It's all very sad, so while you go about your Sunday routine, stop and say a prayer for this kind of murderous behaviour not to happen again.

22 January 2013

The Snow Leopard

Well sometimes we just have to call it a day, and this is one of those times. After many hours of enjoyable painting the Landrover Sport deposited into a Penrhyncoch and Scottish Mountains scene is now finished. Some more work on the glazing and adding my signature earlier today brought this long haul to a satisfying end.

17 January 2013

17 January painting

Another few hours on the oil painting improving the offside and bonnet of the Landrover, changing the wall colours and detailing the church, darkening down the middle building, adding shadow by the bushes, and improving the windscreen

15 January 2013

Vroooooom

The oil painting is progressing well with this session starting at 0730 whereupon I entered a relaxing world of my own and sang some songs without my favourite album playing

13 January 2013

I find painting and drawing quite therapeutic.  But keeping myself busy often means putting some things to one side as I skip along from one activity to the next.  Pen and ink drawing and water colours have been quite a big thing of late along with model making and playing with my grandson.  This oil painting has hung on my wall for the last two years drying out and unactioned.  Then in a lonely moment a few days ago I picked up the brushes and set to work once more. I am really pleased with the progress and have enjoyed painting each day, sometimes with music playing in the background and at other times with tranquil silence.  

This painting is intended as a gift for a friend.  The last gift was a pen and ink and water colour of a car, and the next piece of art will probably be something in charcoal. Why? well simply because I haven't got a clue how to use them, and it's important for me to have lots of things on the go to deflect from my darker moments.

2 January 2013

Photies 6 of 6

The series of photographs that I uploaded for the lovely people of a certain DIY brand have now been removed as promised after the matter was pleasantly concluded :-)

1 January 2013

2012

The iconic moment of 2012,  

Felix Baumgartner Space Jumper:

"I'm going home now"


22 December 2012

Coffee and stuff

Christmas coffee chat and panini with friends Adam and Nia, lovely. Followed by Christmas coffee and cake with Wifey and her friend Mandy. Well a cheap and healthy skinny Cortado and no cake for me, but they enjoyed their cacen and latte. Now if it wasn't for the flooding, getting soaking wet, and the road detour going home: it would have been a perfect day.

21 December 2012

Mince Pies and all the nice stuff

With the Sports Centre closed until the 02 January 2013 the Plan is to run an accumulative Christmas Half Marathon and with that in mind I previously downloaded the NIKE Running App ready to try it out later today.

The running will need a lot of commitment as there's no exercise planned for Christmas Day, Boxing Day, New Years Day and possibly Christmas Eve and New Years Eve so each and every one of the days that are left are extremely important for the Exercise Plan.

But of course being a qualified Strategist; I know that no plan survives first engagement with the enemy, so that sort of scuppers everything written so far :-)

Right, where are those Mince Pies?

18 December 2012

Pretty Woman

And to add to my list (in my last Blog post) of things that appear one way and actually run another way; we can add a scene from that all time favourite film Pretty Woman.  Picture Vivian at the breakfast table the morning after the night before, after the line from Edward Lewis “there are four other chairs” and Vivian gets down from the table and instead settles down into one of the aforementioned chairs.

There she is munching on a croissant.  Not any old croissant mind you, but one that when it is one third eaten, miraculously changes into a pancake that is also one third eaten.  The team managed to get the amount of food eaten to be roughly the same, but alas they picked on the wrong pastry when they continued with shooting the scene.

Now how many times have we watched that film, and not seen the switch until tonight.  You see, all too often we allow ourselves to see what we want, rather than that which is actually there.  A third of the way munched croissant here and problem there.  Maybe it’s not a problem all, but simply a pancake, if you see what I mean.  So remember that the situation is not always how we see it, not even when we are absolutely certain about the accuracy and the clarity that we think that we have about an event or occurrence.  More often than not, it’s about perception and what we want to see.  So go on and add this explanation to my earlier list, and in doing so start to build up a portfolio of coping mechanisms and things to rationalise our feelings, and anger, and confusion.


Oh, and it’s still Merry Christmas, so make sure that you set your hang-ups to one side and get on in there and enjoy yourself.  

16 December 2012

Merry Christmas



Mental ill health is a terrible thing and we all know that Christmas and the New Year is a time that often places an added burden onto an already stretched mind. 

I would like to share some thoughts with you that are equally relevant at any time of the year, but may for be really useful now.  If you have a Counsellor then it might be worth mentioning what you have read, as the professional may place some of the statements into the context that is relevant to your circumstances:

It’s rarely the case that anything is so bad that it can’t be put right,

What we often think of as important, more often than not turns out to be irrelevant,

We often place emphasis on the things that don’t matter, and in doing so neglect that which does matter,

Although you may not agree at this moment in time, from most bad things come good things,

As one door closes, many doors open as we embrace new chances and opportunities,

Those that love you wouldn’t want you to harm yourself, as any harm will also hurt them,

We can’t control the past, we can only learn from it, so don’t dwell too much on what has happened,

We can’t control the future, we can only plan for it, and as most plans need changing, this spoils the planning idea,

If we can’t control the past or the future, and planning has its own hiccups, then maybe it’s time to think more about living for today,

Bullies are often insignificant people, who like to think of themselves as being important,

If you are being bullied, then think of your boss as someone with his or her pants down having a crap,

And when you realise that this is a waste of good thought process, bang in a written complaint about them instead and let them do the stressing and not you,

Putting things down onto paper often expunges the thought process and enables us to get on with life,

There are various coping strategies, and do not know which ones are suitable for your circumstances. An eclectic range of hobbies and activities and interests and tasks seem to work well for me.  Yes, this is about deflection and keeping latent problems under the surface.  But hey ho, if it works then let’s engage in the things that help us to better cope with the problems.  Remember that mental ill health affects lots of people and probably impacts on every family in some way.  The medical professionals, like your GP, can help and guide you towards support systems.  Your Trade Union can give you advice and guidance if you are being bullied.  Many help groups can be found online and in the telephone directory.  So don’t bottle it all up, and instead seek the help and support that you might need and which is readily available free of charge.  Just because someone is not wearing a plaster cast, doesn’t mean that they are not ill.  Take strength in the knowledge that others have or are experiencing similar problems and that with help and support and sensible adaptations they are making it through each day, and you can as well. 

Merry Christmas and a prosperous 2013
  

9 December 2012

Mr President

In the 1994 film 'Guarding Tess' (Nicolas Cage and Shirley MacLaine) and the scene when the President of the United States of America is due to come to town; is that a younger Barack Obama walking just ahead of the ex-First Lady when Shirley and her Special Secret Agents visit the Hypermarket?

8 December 2012

Jacintha Saldanha



I found the news of the untimely and unnecessary death of Jacintha Saldanha extremely upsetting and must admit to shedding quite a few tears.  People can dumb down the act leading to Jacintha’s death by calling it a ‘prank’ or a ‘stunt’ or by using neutral terms such as ‘tragic event’, in order to avoid proportioning or accepting blame.  But in doing so, they must also realise that people are responsible for their actions.  Nobody forced 2DayFM to make the telephone call.  While the presenters were laughing and joking on their video, Jacintha was entering a living hell.  

Now her children have lost their mother.

I refuse to listen to several radio presenters because I have found their unsolicited telephone calls to unsuspecting strangers to be a form of bullying.  Others call it ‘fun’, but I call it ‘nasty’.  There is no place for this kind of behaviour in a modern society irrespective of whether or not it an attempt to ridicule a person, or to extract confidential information.  Any such act is morally wrong. 

I do not accept the argument “the station hadn’t broken any laws” either.  Bullying is a terrible thing, bullying comes in many forms, and there are many examples where the victim has committed suicide.  Manslaughter is a crime, obtaining confidential information, whatever the method, is an invasion of privacy laws, obtaining a pecuniary advantage is a crime.  But Jacintha’s death is not about criminalising the two presenters involved.  I suspect that the worldwide disgust far outweighs the outcome that they could suffer under any penal code. 

The publicity surrounding Jacintha’s death is a reminder that those who do stupid things run the risk of being called to account when those stupid things go badly wrong.  Those who are responsible must be held to account.  They need to be sacked, as does anyone else at the radio station or its parent company that was involved or has moved to try and protect the company while losing sight of the death of Jacintha.  Play music and chat, run competitions, invite guests onto the station, give the sports results, tell us the news, talk about the weather, play more music, but remember that you have no right in any form whatsoever to telephone anyone that you do not know.  And that folks is the bottom line so stop being in denial and wise up.  The outcome was foreseeable, if not this time then at a point in time, as all actions have a reaction.  
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